SC2Mapster

Some feedback for the initiation map:

I really like the atmosphere and the whole setting along with the terraining, they all fit really nicely. I also really liked the music, especially the music that played at certain events. Cool Down feels op as he should do, yet not invincible (although the whole mission was pretty easy as an introduction-mission should be).

Now some random thoughts that could make the map even better:

• Chill out (the W ability) seems to be unfinished. It has no cooldown and can kill neutral & allied units. When you target health-packs with it they dissappear but wont be respawned making the health station useless
• the ice-cream booth is really hard to find, being pretty much at the other side of the map with no instructions how to get there/where to find it. It took me far too long and a look at your screenshots to find it.
• the whole map and its events are pretty spaced out, leading to some serious down-time inbetween events and high chances for the player to get lost. You should implement something for the player to do while he is walking/searching (have random npcs talk on the street, have Cool Down talk to himself , give some random info to buildings/objects the player passes etc), some better guides on where to go (ping the map, thorough descriptions, hints when the player walks aimlessly/for too long) or otherwise some way to travel faster (steal a car, the E ability to be some sort of blink/slide/speedbuff)
• something kinda tied to the previous point: The main-music repeats way too fast for such a long duration that it is being played in. You should add at least one more track that rotates with the current theme
• both the hospital and the police station where open from gamestart yet nothing happens in there (might add some random lines or just close them until their events fire)
• the name of the zoo is not showing properly (last bit is cut off)
• the giant Ursadon has the weapon "Claws Copy"
• some minor thing: Puhlasma gets beat up heavily at the first terran fight (200 life in the middle of the fight) while all other heroes have more than half of their life left after the full fight. Might give him a regeneration or put him in the background or something

Well, this might look like a lot of negative stuff but I really enjoyed the mission, I just think these points need a little work to make it even better. Also love that you were inspired by the ice booth idea, but I just couldnt wait for the whole queue to finish so I killed them all. Oh well.

Looking forward to your next map!