Appreciate your consideration :)

For the 10th, "The Test", I think you should make zerg armies invulnerable when Hazard wakes up. Acutally, I defeated one game because enemies kill either Sakura or Synthetic Overlord (I don't even know who were dead!) when Hazard cinematic is playing.

And you know, if I drag mouse cursor to select my units and make a group, Hazard would not be selected. So I needed to use my shift key to add Hazard into the group. 

By the way, is there any way to skip the cinematic? Since I can't skip it, I have to make a lot of savepoints to avoid watching it over and over.

But the cinematic is very very nice. I LOVE it. and the story... it's interesting.

Ahh... When did this custom storyline be distinguished from the original and how much?

Does Amon exist as canon? If present, how can he revives though Kerrigan died without keystone?

You're making truly impressive custom campaign and new world of Starcraft! :)

and sorry for wrong grammar and word usage if present. Like you, English is not a first language for me. 

Of course it does. If there is a minor problem, then it is that I have to close the SC2 map editor when I start the game, because of the background sound.

I mean, since TC launcher emits background sound and unfortunately I don't know how can remove it, I have to close map editor (TC launcher) to get rid of sound.

But it isn't bothering me so much, then I can enjoy your campaign with no severe troubles.

And if you don't know how to allow us to skip cinematic, then maybe you can make autosaves every time we pass important points. I mean, since I'm accustomed to autosaves (for instance, while playing SC2 campaign) I occasionally miss to save...

@VastanX I just tried the new map. I like the changes. one more thing I would change is the text during the loading screen to. (After being expelled into space. The essence of Abathur traveled to many planets and galaxies. Some fell on asteroids, or planets without any form of life or conditions for it. Many others were captured by stars or black holes. Untill one day a cell embedded in a meteorite fell in the moutains of an unknown planet . After many months of incubation Abathur revived only to realize that he was alone and he did not have a leader to follow.)

one more thing if it is possible to make the text stay on the screen I little longer it would help. I am making you tube videos and sometimes can't read out loud that fast.

not really too difficult more that at the start every where you go is an insta kill unless you just happen to go to the cinematic then go to exactly the right place after. may if one was a little faster so he could at least get away when he saw an enemy it would help, or if he could hide.

@ VastanX thanks but don't you think you went a little over board making this hard?