SC2Mapster

I played mission 4, and as usual there are some issues with polish and what not. I'm sorry if you're already aware of these issues and you just haven't fixed them yet and you're tired of hearing it, but I have a list of things which could use fixing.

- One again, there is at least one typo in the mission loading screen.

- A few bits of dialogue which have typos and/or use incorrect words.

- Overlords death animation is messed up for some reason.

-Trios' walk animation is broken, and plays at an incorrect speed. He also lacks a proper animation while casting Shadow Cannon

- Zoton has NO unit radius, pathing collision or height plane flag. This results in him being able to walk through units and doodads to ANY point on the map, and he cannot be targeted by units which may only attack air or ones which can only attack ground. He is effectively invulnerable against everything except for Hydralisks and Mutalisks, because their weapons don't filter based on the targets height plane flag. In addition to all this, Zoton also has incorrect movement animation speed, and his basic attack ignores armor.

- And lastly, during the final cutscene when the protoss were all recalled out, there was a single solitary probe left behind. I would say it's probably because the probe was inside of an Assimilator when the recall was initiated.

As for criticisms of the mission itself, I would only say that it's a bit too long. By the time you kill all the power cores, you just wait for 14(?) minutes and have units camp the nydus spawn points, which leaves you with nothing to do.

I don't often play user made campaigns, but I randomly decided to give yours a shot, I played the first 3 missions on normal so far. Anyways, I have some feedback.

I noticed a few typos in mission 1's loading screen.

In mission 3 the tips came in twice (So you had 2 of each) and I also noticed some dialogue mistakes, one in particular somewhat comical ;p (Kerrigan: I can feel the power corpsing through me) xd

Now, onto what's not bugs but more a criticism of actual choices. In mission 3 I found Az'huls dialogue including a few bits of vocalization thrown in to be very offputting, imo either go all the way with charecter voice overs, or don't include them at all, because when you put in just a little it's jarring and kinda breaks the immersion.

In mission 1 the final line, which you lifted from Hansen, I recall it feeling really shoehorned in and didn't completely make sense, also somewhat immersion breaking. Anyways that's all for now, I dunno if changing much of anything about the early missions is practical, but these are the things which stood out to me to stand for improvement. I'll get to the later missions in the future :)