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I can't find a way to beat it with Vorazun only or with Vorazun+Dark Archons (they have terrible attacking power) so that's good, nothing's too OP.

Kudos on the income limitations.  I think that too few maps impose macro limitations as a balancing mechanism. 

Some things I wanted to note.  These may be intentional (I don't know), and they may not be bad things.

• You can take out the dark shrine early by using Vorazuns abilities to snipe the forward pylon powering it.  Maybe move the southmost pylon left a bit?
• You can defend against most attack waves with Vorazun and 2-3 dark archons alone (and can get a 75 energy archon before the first wave).  Confusion is an extremely powerful wave delay tool, which allows Vorazun to go all out with her AA and abilities. 
• AI does not rebuild immortals after it sends them at you and doesn't seem to rebuild dark archons either.
• You can't build Dark Templar from normal (non-warpgate) gateways, you just build a dark archon.
• Trying to build a Dark Archon (or a Dark Templar) from a normal gateway produces the Dark Templar image on the queue
• The default hotkey for "select warpgates" overlaps with the default hotkey for Vorazun's "Shadow Strike"
• When casting "Shadow Strike" on the first set of zealots, the screen turns red (the low-hp red, I think)
• Small spelling mistake: "2 years have pasted" -> "2 years have passed"

I wonder if it would be possible to wall off the ramp to your base with DT's given that there is no detection with enemy waves.

I decided to do your mission with an additional challenge: building no unitsI

I strongly recommend placing some observers in the base (however, keep in mind that a suicidal stalker run can be possible, where you blink your stalkers+vorazun (for detection) close to the obs, focus fire the obs, and continue with vorazun).

A few things I noted:

• Vorazun's shadow strike returns her to the place where she cast it, she can use this to snipe high value targets on the edge of detection or to snipe detectors like cannons.
• Building's that aren't pylons/cannons reduce the value of Vorazuns Shadow Strike.  The base layout is pretty good because of the spread out placement of buildings to prevent vorazun from 1-shotting high value targets.
• If you leave Vorazun by the base to watch for incoming attacks, you can take out 800 HP of the attack while it is heading to your base (shadow strike -> blink -> refreshed shadow strike) and probably a further 400 HP with another strike during the engagement.  This does not include auto-attacks.  imo waves on higher difficulties should be designed around this, or she should get a nerf.
• Building some DT's to clean up some of the buildings I left while trying to get that last cannon would have allowed me to complete the mission much faster.

Hello, i play the first mission. Pretty fun first mission, good introduction and nice terrain.

Feedback:

- I chose the hard level and the enemy attack me like 2 times. I think it could be more.

- I suggest to put another vespene geyser. Because dark archons are very expensive or better to take them out.

Nothing else, good work. Keep going and hope to see the next map.

Thank you for your words