SC2Mapster

Just checked the first two missions, pretty enjoyable, good terrain and ok gameplay

*You wrote "templar" instead of "Templars" on mission 1

*Loved the custom UI and nerazim retextures on mission 2

*Dark Archons are a bit OP so early in a campaign imho

*Looking forward for the next mission, that sadly is delayed ...

*Good luck

just a quick update

• You can blink into places that you really shouldn't be able to blink into
• Signifiers feel kinda redundant this mission, outside of feedbacking other signifiers (confusion is pretty much a better version of psi storm).  However, the fact that they can use feedback as soon as they warp in and that they are cloaked could mean that they will have some uses later
• You start with 0 minerals, that delays the first probe
• Turns out dark archons and signifiers have the same base hotkey (that explains my warpgate/gateway comment the first time, I didn't notice signifiers in top row)
• Waves felt a little weaker this time (once you got an archon).  Unlike the first mission, where enemies can still use abilities on enemies (or so it seemed they could) while confused, there's a lot less defense against it.

Wow amazing job converting all the structures/warp ins to nerazim faction.  Awesome custom units too.  Gameplay felt nice (was more interested in experimenting than winning, so more detail later). Story was coherent.

Is it intentional that you can clear the United orders main base without clearing the outpost?

I think you get a few too many minerals on brutal...

• some small mistakes
• "whose" should be "who is" (counted this mistake twice)
• "severed yourself to" -> "severed yourself from"
• "Let's just get on with this, ok" doesn't seem very protoss-like
• "that their allied" -> "that they are allied"
• "then you people" -> "then you terrans"
• dunno why Rohana's "character development" has gone backwards (I thought she reconciled with the idea of unity when she severed her nerved cords, could be wrong)
• warp-in effects really stretch (and cyber-core displays upgrades available when complete)
• signifier hover tooltip dark archon (can you create a custom hover tip thingy?)
• can't chrono the dark shrine
• Building a Dark Archon at gateway builds a Dark Archon, warping in a DA from warp gate warps in a nerazim HT.

I play Allies.

I love the Nerazim faction you created.

Just two things:

- A Hellbat killed Jon in the final cinematic, he came out of nowhere.

- I have seen many dialogues about how the protoss speak. And when they refer to a Terran they say name and surname. And when relationship is more significant, they say friend "last name".

What's the new update?

Just letting you know that I never hit Esc when I played the mission. Not sure if that effects anything or not.

My last bit of feedback, I think

• DT build hovertext in gateway/warpgate doesn't note that they are Nerazim faction (which means they have the shadow strike ability).  Of course, you can't beat it with DT only, centurion stun + confusion will end your hopes and dreams.
• Weirdly, stalkers seem to be the only unit that aren't Nerazim.  Is this intentional?

Well done on the map in general.  A map that rewards you for having a balanced composition, micro is rewarded, well designed limitations on income, and an enemy that gets reinforcements during the final battle is always fun to fight.

Apologies, let me clarify my points.

• They don't have the build tooltip to indicate that they are nerazim faction on gateways/warp gates
• Building a stalker from a normal (non-warpgate) gateway produces a normal stalker 
• Warping in a stalker warps in a Nerazim stalker