Well, what I was saying was basically, "Nice tutorial, but you need to clean up the spelling and grammar." The text doesn't really flow very well and looks, honestly, quite awful. I like the concept of your tutorial, but if you want some help with the writing part, I could rewrite it for you :)
That is your opinion, and since your opinion is based on pre-alpha footage from the campaign, that's fair enough. However, why it was necessary to voice that opinion in a non-constructive manner, without suggesting what you would like to see to, in your view, improve upon it, that I do not understand.
If it's about the graphics quality, you'll have to take that up with Blizzard as that was all standard out-of-the-box textures and models (which will be customized to a degree in the final version).
The purpose of the trailer was primarily to show the voice-overs and to give an introduction to the campaign, not to woo anyone with technical brilliance or artistic touch.
We have not yet planned out every mission, but we do intend to include some sort of RTS-mission at least once (paying homage to SC of course) and very likely some sort of racing mission, too (based on the super-great racing physics engine by HaggisNZ).
It's going to be a very varied, yet continuous storyline that progresses through several different mission types, to offer a varied experience.
Since it is going to be co-op, however, we will not be able to use the NextMap feature, which will mean users will have to host the missions individually.
OK, far be it from me to nag about anything, but ... seriously, those red squiggly lines in Word are there for a reason, bud. Oh, and the green ones too.
Equipment management and graphics. ("Character screen")
Custom 3D models for Tank and Red.
The first map in the campaign is more or less finished story-wise and design-wise, but we still need to work on the programming, cut-scenes and the mod-core. Voice-overs are about 50% done for the first map.
Estimated progress towards project Alpha status: 15%.
We didn't particulary want to drop out of the sky on that god-forsaken planet, but neither I nor Tank (that's Mr. Thomas Babbitt to you!) could have guessed that things would have been that bad. Oh, well. At least it's something to do.
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@nukedboom:
Well, what I was saying was basically, "Nice tutorial, but you need to clean up the spelling and grammar." The text doesn't really flow very well and looks, honestly, quite awful. I like the concept of your tutorial, but if you want some help with the writing part, I could rewrite it for you :)
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@doos101:
That is your opinion, and since your opinion is based on pre-alpha footage from the campaign, that's fair enough. However, why it was necessary to voice that opinion in a non-constructive manner, without suggesting what you would like to see to, in your view, improve upon it, that I do not understand.
If it's about the graphics quality, you'll have to take that up with Blizzard as that was all standard out-of-the-box textures and models (which will be customized to a degree in the final version).
The purpose of the trailer was primarily to show the voice-overs and to give an introduction to the campaign, not to woo anyone with technical brilliance or artistic touch.
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@TerranHegemon:
We have not yet planned out every mission, but we do intend to include some sort of RTS-mission at least once (paying homage to SC of course) and very likely some sort of racing mission, too (based on the super-great racing physics engine by HaggisNZ).
It's going to be a very varied, yet continuous storyline that progresses through several different mission types, to offer a varied experience.
Since it is going to be co-op, however, we will not be able to use the NextMap feature, which will mean users will have to host the missions individually.
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OK, far be it from me to nag about anything, but ... seriously, those red squiggly lines in Word are there for a reason, bud. Oh, and the green ones too.
Your sig is absolutely right. "My eyes!".
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Currently developing:
The first map in the campaign is more or less finished story-wise and design-wise, but we still need to work on the programming, cut-scenes and the mod-core. Voice-overs are about 50% done for the first map.
Estimated progress towards project Alpha status: 15%.
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BLACK SPACE
We didn't particulary want to drop out of the sky on that god-forsaken planet, but neither I nor Tank (that's Mr. Thomas Babbitt to you!) could have guessed that things would have been that bad. Oh, well. At least it's something to do.
Pre-Alpha Trailer:
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FEATURES:
Stay tuned for updates. Please use this thread or the Team page for feedback and ideas.
Black Space will be released by Stuido Viking "when it is ready". (Proposed release date for the first map is late September 2010).
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http://www.sc2mapster.com/maps/x-roads-1-0/
Hello folks, I'd appreciate if you'd give me some feedback on this 4-man multiplayer map I made.
Always looking to improve, so constructive criticism and feedback is warmly welcomed!